Beware that this is my first ever critique, so if I by any chance say anything inappropriate in any way or form, just say so. You have permission to slap me if I do so.

Anywho~ Let me just start with the fact that the drawing looks AMAZING. Well, everything you do is pretty darn epic, but hey, we all have our flaws.

Vision and Technique

Anatomy

I really like how it turned out, as I mentioned earlier. But, it does have it's flaws. Like... Well, this one is pretty obvious, and I bet even you don't like how it turned out. The hand. I understood that you put a lot of effort in it, and I can clearly see that. I also understand that hands are TREMENDOUS BUTTS *shot* extremely hard to master, and I admit that I can't even draw hands myself, but hey, you'll get the hang of it. What I suggest is that you don't make it look so... Curved, if you will. And try not to leave a gap like that between fingers. take your own hand as a reference. For the ring finger and the pinky, you could add a small angle to it in the middle, showing that it's actually bending down. And try not to make it too separate from the other fingers, as well. Veridicus' hands turned out pretty nicely, though. I honestly don't see flaws in them. Krissi's head does bother me just a bit. it looks really nice, I can tell you that. But next time, try to make it a bit higher on the shoulder level. Correct me if I am wrong, but what I mean is that I don't think shoulders could possibly reach that high across the head. At least, that's my opinion. The legs look rather a bit off on Veridicus, but that's no big deal. Overall, the anatomy looks pretty darn great in this deviation.

Objects

As I did with the anatomy, I obviously have to critique on the objects, don't I? Anyway, let's start with the couch. It looks better than any couch I can draw, that's for sure. I understand you're trying to make it look like weight it being put down on the couch. And it does, really. But I don't believe he could possibly be that light. What I mean is, and again, correct me if I'm wrong, make the lines a bit more intense. As in, make it look like it has more weight on them. And I suggest (to make it look like he's actually laying on it) starting the lines from his own body, so the pressure would like like it's coming from him. Same thing on the arm of the couch (if that's what you call it). And maybe a little bit on the back part of it, cause I don't think they could lean on that without putting much weight on it As for the pillow, it doesn't really look it it's floating. It just looks like it'll fall of the couch. If that's what you intended, then, okay then. But if you intended to make Veridicus look like he's laying on it, then try to lower it and add some pressure to it, as I said before with the couch thing. The rest of the picture looks great in my opinion


Originality and Impact

I'm gonna be honest with ya, Krissi. the impact was pretty big on me, seeing that you have improved so fast with anthro art, and also the fact that your anatomy is almost flawless in this, and even more with the fact that you used a reference. As for originality, I wouldn't say that this is completely original, seeing that obviously other artists have done something similar to this over the time. And even more that you used a reference picture to do this But hey, this looks amazing, and I honestly love the way this turned out. I can't stop talking about that.

Resuming pretty much everything mentioned in this, all you gotta do is add more pressure the next time you want to do something like this again All in all, this picture looks epic, and I know that you'll get plenty of favorites and comments on this. keep up the amazing work, Krissi! I look forward to seeing you post more art and improving each and every day!

Signed,

~Ikuzim AKA ~enid7

_{I am very sorry if I in any way hurt your feelings or something. It was not my intention.}